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This wall ought to be broken down,
Tore apart,
Completely demolished
For the crime of standing between
Me
And you.
Separating us.

But I know it's not merely a wall.
It is miles and years and fate.
Things that can't be broken, ever.
Because if they were, well,
That would be it, wouldn't it?

We can't be too selfish;
Other lives are involved.
We are too good, too kind to allow our own wants to endanger two worlds.

Why can you never have any good luck?
Why does the universe feel the need to always punish you?
You have done nothing but generous acts,
Shown only mercy,
Still, somehow it is always you who pays the dearest price.
Somehow you're never given a break from the any of it:
The heartbreak, the soul-ache, the mind-numbing pain.
Nothing you deserve.

If it were possible, this wall would be down.
The miles would be gone and those years would disappear.
Fate wouldn't even be a factor.
We wouldn't have to be selfish.
This wall would disappear and you would come back
And this ache,
Yes, this one,
Right here in the middle of my chest,
Burning with the knowledge of never seeing you again,
Would have never existed.

But it is not to be.
So I drag myself from this wall,
Ignoring the ache.
I pull myself away to fulfill a promise.
I'm going to do what you made me swear I'd try.
I'm going to live life to the fullest.
I'm going to live life to the fastest,
The best,
The brilliant.
I am going to live the fantastic life
All in my search for a way back to you.
I need to thinkg of something not Doctor Who inspired...I haven't even seen Doomsday yet. I have the entire second series, I'm just avoiding it. I'm not in the crying mood yet.
Obviously, this is from Rose's POV sometime after/during Doomsday.
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HelenaCarter Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
It is wonderful! The last two verses nearly made me cry!
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MorbidDramaQueen Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, please don't! Thank you!
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HelenaCarter Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome! I will try.
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GallifreyanGeek Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
Aww :aww: And I don't blame you-- that one is terribly sad :(
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Feyrin Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you play any instrument? In my opinion you should create a song for this poem :)
If i play an instrument, i would ask you to use this for a song, but i'm not able :P
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MorbidDramaQueen Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
No, sadly enough. But maybe I'll have a friend set it to a track. But if you know anyone who would be interested, by all means. My only request is that I'm credited, its not used for prophet, and you totally send me a recording. Brilliant idea!
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Feyrin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Sadly I don't know anyone who can put in music that and in the same time loves dr who so much. (and also it's your poem, i would feel embarassed in using it, i would feel like having stolen you some idea, even if i would give all the credits to you):P

But it sounded a great idea, i decided to comunicate it to you. :)

Bye!!! :hug:
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Feyrin Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow!
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Pale-Face-and-Rain Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
me too i am not going to watch it...ignoring it .....
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TardisDreamer Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
That's cool! And sad :cries: I've seen Doomsday before but I can't watch it again, too chicken and I'd cry.
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